updated :)
December 17th, 2011 at 04:36am
angeleyesful / Comments
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Yes i updated! three cahpters babeDecember 15th, 2011 at 12:33am
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Aww thank you Angeleyes! I do plan on countinuing I have like five chapters written up I just didnt get a chance to post them. But I will deffinately get them up this friday!November 15th, 2011 at 08:41pm
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Hola~ I'm Mathia, I write HP, Vampire Diaries, Twilight, a7x, Original stories and a few more. Please check it out and tell me what you think- thank you!September 17th, 2011 at 08:12am
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Girl, you're blowin up my comments. Do you realize that you sent about 46 of the same one? lolSeptember 8th, 2011 at 02:56am
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srry we havent heard of ur character in a while x.X I'll bring her up ASAPAugust 20th, 2011 at 09:06pm
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How are you?? [:August 9th, 2011 at 09:54pm
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:O IMMA GO UPAugust 5th, 2011 at 06:29pm
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chapter two upAugust 1st, 2011 at 08:35am
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I don't know what to make of your story since it's only the first chapter, but I do have some pointers.
When someone is talking, put "quotations" around their words, every time. and identify who is saying what so that the reader doesn't have to think about it.
also, use more paragraphs. When someone starts talking or a new topic/ occurance is brought in, make a new paragraph.
I don't want your story to get reported for grammical and technical errors when you're just starting it.
I'll tell you how I like it when you post more chapters!August 1st, 2011 at 04:13am -
If you want to, you can also change the title. You know, catch the readers attention :3 but if you'd like to keep it the same, that's totally fine <3
I know this story is going to be great (:July 31st, 2011 at 11:19pm -
As soon as I get my sneaky hands on my mom's laptop ill start xPJuly 31st, 2011 at 09:56pm
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Maybe u should do like a little flashback on when they were happy or do it like u r now, and either his friends are abusive like him or they are like...bystanders and they try to help you leave .. And while you are gone he is crazy ay first but he tries to change...until you get back DUN DUN DUNNJuly 31st, 2011 at 09:20pm
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Can I make a banner for this? Well not now cuz my laptop is broken x.X im on my friggin phone for cryin out loud DxJuly 31st, 2011 at 09:15pm
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Welcome to the pk team!July 30th, 2011 at 09:24pm
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Thank u..i was so getting swamped for my other stories o.e I needed ur help cuz in pk ur in the residency xDJuly 30th, 2011 at 09:24pm
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I have a question (dont squeal ;) ) how would you like to be a co-author for poison kisses?July 30th, 2011 at 08:25am
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ThanxJuly 26th, 2011 at 01:24pm
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Tank yuhhJuly 19th, 2011 at 01:35pm
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the 2nd chap is up!July 17th, 2011 at 04:56am
