I dont really get any feedback on my stuff.I would really like to get positive and negative if any responses.Im not too good if i do say so myself, at writing.So, i wanna know what you guys think about my poems, and/or journals.Dont be afraid to critisize. It helps me (:I mean some people have commented on my stuff,and i thank you guys.I would just love for more of it so i can excell in my...

Being with you, is... amazing.. Being the only word close to describing it.You're the best boyfriend ever.But we argue, i wont say fight.But we argue, often.Either i do/ say something to make you mad.. Or ViseVersa.I dont want to argue with you.I try not to argue with you, but its hard.We are too alike yet so different.But we love each other.Maybe the arguements are showing that we love each...

It haunts me. It calls my name. It wants to hurt me. It gets pleasure from my pain. It wants to cut my skin. It doesnt want to leave me alone. It likes to seeme cry. It likes my tears. It doesnt understand. Why does it hate me? Why cant it let me be happy? I see it, and all i want to do is use. All i want to do is hurt me. All i want to do is cry. Let out all my pain and tears. Why cant it go...

I wonder, do I ever cross your mind? I wonder, do you think about me as much as i think about you? I wonder, am I all you ever wanted? I wonder, will you ever find someone better? I wonder, do you wanna be with me forever? I wonder, why do I wonder all these things? I wonder, why am I so insecure? I wonder, will I ever trust you enough not to hurt me? I wonder, how did i fall so hard for you? I...

You were sitting there with your friend and i never thought you'd ever look at me the way i looked at you. I thought you were just another guy i had a little crush on. I never knew you'd fall for me. Then I broke you down, i hurt you, i broke your heart. I never thought youd take me back, maybe you shouldnt have.. But you did. Im glad you did. I never knew id fall for you, fall so hard, not able...