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  • MarriahShadz

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    Thanks for the friend request. :)
    If you have any questions, feel free to ask me. I'll help out as much as I can. :)
    September 12th, 2011 at 05:14am
  • MarriahShadz

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    Alright, I'm working on the first chapter now.
    I'll read through it a few times after I finish just to be sure I didn't miss anything.
    September 12th, 2011 at 04:40am
  • MarriahShadz

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    No, not really because I'm not writing the story or helping you co-write. I'm just editing.
    September 12th, 2011 at 04:36am
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    You can trust me. This will be the second story I'm editing.
    I think it's kinda fun, tbh. And I don't mind helping out. :)
    September 12th, 2011 at 04:32am
  • MarriahShadz

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    You can send me the chapters through a private message and I'll pm them back to you once I've edited them.
    I'll start working on the first chapter tonight and send it back to you tomorrow so you can post it. :)
    Just so you know, I won't be changing anything other than the grammar. I'm not going to rewrite or change anything, okay?
    September 12th, 2011 at 04:27am
  • MarriahShadz

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    I was actually thinking the same thing when I noticed you had mentioned that you got the idea for your story from the show. Pregnancy is something that unfortunately happens every day.

    Would you like me to beta for you? That way you can see the corrections and hopefully it will help your writing improve.
    September 12th, 2011 at 04:08am
  • Shadow14

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    You're welcome :) It's really good.
    September 11th, 2011 at 07:31pm
  • faithleilani

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    no problem
    September 11th, 2011 at 12:19am
  • After Twilight

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    Kewl... Could you check out my story:
    Will You Be Mine???
    It's a bit gruesome - just a warning.
    And I'm just fixing up the chapter for
    Dirty Little Secret.
    September 11th, 2011 at 12:04am
  • After Twilight

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    I've gotta go now, but I'll give you a comment when I get back on, okay?
    September 10th, 2011 at 02:20am
  • After Twilight

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    Awesomeness! And thanks for the story comment, it was nice;) I'll start it soon then!
    September 10th, 2011 at 02:16am
  • After Twilight

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    Well I was planning that she'd been raped. Is that good? Also, and you don't have, could you check out any of my stories? Tehe, can you update Killing me slowly now please? And do you want me to write a chapter now?
    September 10th, 2011 at 02:04am
  • After Twilight

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    And also, I've done the layout for it!
    September 10th, 2011 at 01:50am
  • After Twilight

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    Well, first, can I be Adelaide, because I have her secret sorted. And what I was thinking was that Jenna finds out about Adelaide's secret and that's how they, you know, become friends. And then I was thinking that Jenna -obviously- gets the guy or something like that. But the Adelaide's boyfriend finds out about her secret and yeah... that's all I got.
    What do you want to happen?
    September 10th, 2011 at 01:49am
  • After Twilight

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    I added you to story, check it out? Who do you want to be? Adelaide or Jenna? I'd prefer to be Adelaide. Anyway, tell me what you think. I haven't posted anything yet, so take a peak on your stories, okay?
    September 10th, 2011 at 01:12am
  • After Twilight

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    And you just have to go on 'Make layout for story' and then you go on like google images or something and then you hover the mouse over the pic you want when it comes up then you right click and it will have a list of stuff. Chose 'copy image address' okay. Paste it in the little boxes and there you go!
    September 10th, 2011 at 12:21am
  • After Twilight

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    Hmmm, I was thinking it could be about two friends nd their lives and so on and so forth, tehe;) Ichanged the layout a bit since yesterday, so yeah. I'll add you to story when i've completed the about and stuff and you can edit it and everything;) Sound alright?
    September 10th, 2011 at 12:19am
  • After Twilight

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    Sounds kewl to me! I haven't ever written a joint story, so, yeah. I can make the layout for it if you like, and I'll do all the boring bits an add you to authors - you can have a look at it and then chose what to keep and what to chuck, sound good? And do you like the layout?
    September 10th, 2011 at 12:08am
  • After Twilight

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    Yup, you've added me! Kewl, tell me what you think of the layout, yeah? I can change anything!
    September 9th, 2011 at 11:42pm
  • After Twilight

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    Good good good! I'm going to take that as a yes;) But you just need to add me to authors so I can add the layout - not a scam! Promise!
    September 9th, 2011 at 05:23am