Ah, brillliant, your responses erase any uneasiness I felt as to the direction of Nails For Breakfast... Still hanging, though. Update, dammit, 'fore I 'splode!
Naww, but isn't it fun to know 'peace' in different languages? I used to take Arabic, you know, in my sophomore year. And Chinese, too. And then Hadag Nachash's song, Shalom Salaam Peace, is a personal favourite of mine... well, ANYTHING Hebrew rap is a personal favourite of mine...
serious?! That's so cool, I'm jealous! I wish I lived somewhere neat. I have to say mid-western America isn't the best place on earth, as you probably know :)
Lulz, I try.
I like...meaningful comments, y'know?
Oh man, the shit that comes out of my mouth when I'm video gaming is too indecent even for the Internets, so I guess we're alike in that respect.
Hey, I know your jealous, but no one boards my metaphorical pervy boat without coups from ME, so better stay on my good side if you want in on it (and you DO.).
I forgot to mention this in my comment on chapter 20, but I wanted to say I'm pumped for Ryan's inevitable first fight, when he finally uses his tricksy little mind for the offensive. He's such a smarty-pants, I can't think of a more perfect power for him, to surprise everyone by using it in different ways and stuff. And he'd do it all in pin-striped pants, because that's just how Ryan Ross rolls.
I foresee a roadblock for him with physical stuff though, amiright? He'll need some serious dodgy-blocky tactics before he goes fightin'.
That's all. Lookin' forward to the update, of course.
Hi there. I just read your story and I must say... wow I'm in love with it. For real, the whole context is so different from the other stories I've seen and all. I also love the way your Ryan is absolutely cute. I can't wait to read the chapter 20. Please write more because your fans like you :)
I totes know whatcha mean. Too many stories have the 'instant hit-off' sort of deal, and while that's fine ('cos we all know that's totally what happened ;D) it's not good if the author doesn't take time on both their personalities 'cos they just assume we know them already if we're even reading. But I like when they build that super awesome friendship that we know they had, even around the sexual tension.
So...thank you! For writing the epic friendship stage!
Ok, I think I understand it a little better :), so Brendon can move things and block out thoughts (a part of his powers that he learned to develop) and Ryan can hear people's thoughts/show them his and he can only move things like people by being in their head? Am I getting this somewhat?
I just really like your story and am trying to fully get the characters