So, I just wanted to thank you for what you said about my story, The Avengers Initiative. I only have one friend I let read/edit my writing and she enjoys it, so it means a lot that someone else thinks I have talent. :] You should check her stuff out too; you can find her on my friend's list, her name is Avani Echo.
Hey:] So, I went back and read the last chapter of Resistance and I was thinking about how much better it could be if I re-wrote it:x I know it's a little confusing for the readers but I can't help it.
I have this whole flow of the story where Cam is supposed to be really stubborn and bad ass and I feel like her personality should be amplified, especially on this date.
So I guess I was just wondering what you think? Just to get another view on things:]
Not yet, I don't think I'm that good to become an author, not yet anyhow :-) I love what others think though and I agree as we write we get better. My teacher hated me so that was the extent of her ignorance. I never proved anything to her and she gave me a failing grade even though I was writing college type work the students that kissed her arse failing or not always passed. A mentality of middle school teachers. It was quite sad. But someday hope to be an author :-) it's one of my goals and dreams. Someday!
That is the heart of a true writer. My 7th grade English teacher looked me dead in the eye and told me I would never amount to anything significant, as a writer she told me I had a lot of weak points, that to become a successful author (when I told her I wanted to be an author when I got older) I would have to prove myself. My response was, I love to write - who cares about trying to prove myself to you. You don't get it...probably why you're also a English teacher and not a very good one at that if you have to insult your students. ...that comment also earned me a day in detention, writing 500 times I will not make an idiot out of the teacher...it was supposed to be 'I will be respectful to the teacher.' I just wrote that instead. I ended up losing the battle though lol. That's all I meant is don't take it to heart, there will always be idiots telling you one thing but don't even practice their own advice.
Oh and thank you for recommending my story 'My Captive Savior' that was really nice of you! :-) I'll recommend yours as well, though I believe I already have let me check real quick and see - yep, all good.
Not a problem! It flowed great to me. Just remember, never take to heart what others say, believe in yourself first and foremost and write for you. Don't write for anyone but you because you can't please everyone. That's what makes writing so amazing, you can express yourself freely. Weather it's fan fiction or original fiction. It can be as detailed or as little detailed as you want. I take a lot of what people say to heart but I don't let it influence weather or not I continue to write.
Keep on with what you're doing, because you have a talent. A lot better then what I use to write at 15, believe me.
Its very pretty. :) I like my hair being a reddish brown. Its a light brown naturally, I'm not a huge fan of it, but it doesn't seem to come in the same as it use to because of dying it. Which doesn't bother me too much.
In that picture on my profile I hadn't colored it in about six months or so, so it is closer than others. I do color my hair every once and a while, my normal color is a little less red than most pictures. And thank you very very much! :)