Nah your story will be fine. Your punctuation is good.
I'm the opposite I forget commas all the time. I've only just managed to remember to put full stops at the end of a sentance when I'm typing!
I'm sure you'll have nothing to worry about
Not a problem. =]
I think Mibba's okay, I preffer it to Quizilla but that's maybe just me.
The only thing that I can find not os much wrong but annoying with it [I haven't been here that long yet] is that they have supervisors that will sometimes read your stuff and pick out bad punctuation and spelling and stuff. That might just be because I have bad punctuation lol.
Apart form that I find it good.
I know a few people have already said this but I read your stuff on quizilla.
I love it. I'm forever checking to see if you've updated 'You Give Love A Bad Name' It's honestly so amazing.
Sorry I haven't messaged before, my bad.
=]
D:
everyone writes incest or 'frerard' these days.
gawsh, in my opinion, it's a little gross.
just goes to show you about the future of america, doesn't it?
Why hello there, dude. I read your story on Quizilla. It's totally rad. If you don't finish soon, then I'll have to continue doing what I've been doing before your latest update. Which is writing more chapters to my crappy Bob Bryar story.