Hey mano! haha Yeah...school and work are taking over my life at the moment, so I'm pretty flustered. Plus I have finals in a couple of weeks. But I should be back to writing soon!
:s Sorry, I'm not saying it's a big deal or anything. It's a pet peeve of mine if i don't see quotation marks in a story, rather than it looking like a AIM conversation.. Your grammar is all together fine though, i just don't like the none use of quotation marks. XD