Dan Moore / Comments

Hey, thanks. And I'm a pretty big music fanatic lol.

Makes a lot more sense now. Sorry I didn't understand what you were saying. I guess it just seems like it's something you learn over time, to be more descriptive and such. I use spell check, that's why my spelling is so mad hardcore. =]

Oh I see. Well she's still awesome, and out there.

Sorry if this sounds funny or like lecturing, because that's not what I'm aiming for at all. But, you probably shouldn't try and write like someone, if your writing is similar to mine and you're embracing it, go for it. It's just kind of hard for me to understand trying to write like someone else's style. Mostly because I just write what comes to me at the time. I'm sorry if that seems offensive, because really that's not what I was going for. I just wanted to express my opinion, if it offends you sorry.
I'll read your first chapter right now. I should be able to read it now. Yeah.
And it might seem more like a book because i wrote it for my science class and when I'm writing for school I try to make it sound more. I dunno like professional. Thanks again.

Oh awesome thanks! I actually feel really awesome that you'd think like that because um I don't think it's very good, but that's just me.
Thanks for reading my Lonely Robot story. I'm glad you're trying sci-fi and um stuff. I'm hugely into science fiction.

Thanks for commenting.
What do you mean by "author's appeal"?

Heyyy why'd you take some of ur pictures downnn??? ooo ooo go to my profile and see spit-face!

I haven't updated in awhile, 'cause I've been with Kara. I plan on updating soon (as soon as I find my notebook with my writing in it people frikken cleaned while i was bloody gone and I was only gone a week!), and finishing the story soon too.

Ah new profile!
So if you sent me a profile comment, I won't be able to read it, 'cause Kara's computer doesn't like my page. That's it um yeah..

Thanks for the story comment. But I totally ment 50 chapter's all together. I only have a few left to write.

Keeeeevin! isnt he beautiful????

OMG its so shorrrt. I've never seen it that shorrrrt. wowww. I like it.

Thanks for the story comment.

Ok hurrys. cuz i wanna see you. but i love k-marfaz. cuz ppl know me by that.

um yeah.

lol and why did you call me k-martize! its Kmarfaz! lol unless you werent talking about me but it sounded a lot like my name.

Dangit danielle! I wanna see a picture of you. I wanna see if you look different.

Well, I have to end it sometime. Right now it's just calling me though, so I should sometime soon. I just don't know which ending to pick... ha. Someone once said that "ending a story is much like taking your child out into the woods and shooting them", or something along those lines. That was a very morbid person and I respect them very much, because that's what it seems like. That's how it's going to be for me. I've never "officially" ended a story before. And now I'm ending a line of three. Good luck to me with this!

Thanks for the story comment. I'll update as soon as I write more GOSH! haha, I hope to write more soon, I have a line going on where I want it to go, but that's about it. I'm also planning on ending the series soon. I just don't know which epilogue to use. The first one I had planned (that no one's expecting) or the second one (which i'm sure at least someone's expecting).

Heyyyy! whats up? *thanks* how come you dont have any pictures?

Blue would seriously look alright?
I'm glad that you're so happy about seeing me, becasue um I feel sorta weird now but yeah.
Thanks about my story. I probably won't be writing for awhile, 'cause I'm sick right now and I just haven't written. I'm glad it's fitting together; I'm always real worried about that.
I don't think I've ever smiled as much as I have been lately. I suppose I have been happier now. True though, we haven't seen each other in awhile.
If you're REALLY tired, maybe you should like, sleep?