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  • noviangelss

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    Hey thank you so much for commenting on my story "A New Girl in Town! :D it does mean a lot though I don't know what to reply when you said there was a few usage errors. I usually write my story just the way it is, so I kinda not understand about what to say, but I'll try to be better and better again.
    About the character, you have to keep reading the story to find out what will happen next though I have to say that the main character is kinda dull, yeah this is just the beginning and it'll change as the story goes on.
    I'll update soon and I hope you'll keep reading this :)
    About the layout, I'm so sorry I always update my mibba via my phone so I haven't created any layout yet. I'll create it soon though.
    Once again, thanks for commenting, it means a lot <3 I really hope you'll coment about the grammar too :D
    July 14th, 2012 at 01:19pm
  • Valiente

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    Thank you so much for the comment (Tell Me What I Need To Know). It absolutely made my day a whole lot better!

    By the way, I love your avatar. It's adorable :3 -A
    July 8th, 2012 at 07:40pm
  • LettersToNormandy

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    Oh goodness.... Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it, like really. Thank you so so much for your comment!
    July 5th, 2012 at 03:41am
  • katie13

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    Thank you for your comment on Late Dawns and Early Sunsets!

    I'm making this more of a fantasy story and less of a Frerard. (which you will see more obviously in the chapters that I'll be posting over the next while, I have them written but they're not beta'd yet) I've done the whole Frerard thing before and I got bored of it, it's too cliché.

    Also, I didn't make my layout because I'm shit at stuff like that so I have no idea what you're talking about. So um, yeah. Haha, thanks again for the comment, hope you continue to read because the story gets much better soon ;-)
    July 4th, 2012 at 04:18pm
  • A T T A C K !

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    Thank you so much for your amazing comment on my story 'Black Bones'! :]
    I'm so glad you enjoy it and your comment made me so happy I was almost spewing rainbows! Nothing makes me happier than people like you giving me such wonderful feed back. It means so much to me!
    And yes, Elmer is one helleva name- I'm glad you like it! I'll try to update soon, just so you're not in TOO much suspense ;]
    July 4th, 2012 at 07:50am
  • DamaskWallpaper

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    My power went out for awhile so my dad took me to get Chinese food at 1:00 am. haha good times

    Thanks for commenting so quickly! o_O
    July 1st, 2012 at 02:47am
  • tiffagold

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    LolI a so glad that I made you laugh!!! I don't try to be funny hahah but yes just wait until you get 16, that stage should come soon.
    July 1st, 2012 at 02:16am
  • tiffagold

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    Thanks so much for reading my story, The One For Me!!! I am so happy you did. Lol I hope it is good enough for you to keep up with it! :)
    June 29th, 2012 at 05:20am
  • Formaldehyde.

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    Thank you for commenting on Only Fools Rush In :)
    Ahh, i'm so happy that you enjoyed it even though you're not an ATL fan. It means a lot, honest :D
    Haha! I changed the layout slightly, so hopefully it's better :)
    And thanks for subscribing! I'll have an update later today.
    June 28th, 2012 at 01:11pm
  • n. josten

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    You're very welcome, m'dear!
    I really adored your story endlessly. And oh, don't feel too bad. I tend to enjoy using commas a lot. That's a whole lot worse than using parentheses often. I come off as improper, boo.
    June 25th, 2012 at 04:47am
  • hello love.

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    thanks for your comment :D is there anything you can actually identify about the plot/characters that didn't grab you? i feel bad, because that's exactly how i feel about it lol. i guess all this is just setting up for what i want to happen next, but i do feel that sometimes i make it too much of a backstory. idk. :/
    June 23rd, 2012 at 11:18am
  • LookingForSophie

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    Thank you for the comment! :)
    I think the first few chapters are probably the worst for spelling and grammatical mistakes and I must agree re-reading over them I have spotted quite a few. I agree though, I love to use commas, sometimes get a bit confused about where to put them though :P Thank you for the comment and the advice, I shall be sure to take it on board! :)
    June 21st, 2012 at 01:02am
  • sleepingonthewaves

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    Hahaha, thank you for the comment. And sure darling. I would marry you. Hahahahhaa.
    June 20th, 2012 at 03:47am
  • morshu101

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    Yay agreement I hate the books, but I read them all so that I could know what would happen. Six books later there is finally a climax. A two page climax. Thank you for the comment.
    June 20th, 2012 at 03:30am
  • darkbunny96

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    Thanks for your comment and I didnt find it mean or rude at all I prefer it when people are blunt and give me more advice than just 'write more' , and I totally didnt notice that all of my sentences started in I, I had to sit and laugh at that for a bit and I totaly know my grammar is bad but it doesnt bother me too much since I only really write them for fun and I dont really plan on becoming a writer or anything but anyways I will still take what you said into consideration in the future and thanks again for the comment :)
    June 20th, 2012 at 02:23am
  • EzioAuditore

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    Thank you for your comment o:
    I appreciate the part about the layout too, I'm just not quite sure what to change...I have been on Mibba with several computers and each time my layout looked kinda different, so I found it hard to really chose what to change o:
    June 18th, 2012 at 01:33am
  • AshleyJinxxBiersack

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    Hey! ^,^
    Just wanted to drop by and say thank you for your comment on mine and Bree's (SearchingForSerenity) story. It means a lot and it made me giggle XD
    I'm already married to Bree, but I'm sure I could talk her into a three-way marriage ;) heh.
    Much love to you<3
    June 17th, 2012 at 05:03pm
  • CreatureOfTheNight

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    ohmygod no way!? That's awesome!!!!!!! #fangirling
    June 17th, 2012 at 02:04am
  • koobyloob

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    Thanks for your comment!
    I'm annoyed at myself for allowing grammar errors though :/
    It's my biggest pet peeve :/
    I finished writing it late, so I'm using the excuse that I was tired. Haha.
    Anyway, thank you for commenting!
    June 16th, 2012 at 05:30am
  • Captain Mars

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    No problem! I enjoy your writing :)
    June 16th, 2012 at 03:40am