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Thank You for the comment on my story. :) it means a lot.

Sory if you feel ostracised, that was not my intent.
not to be wordy, or come out negative, but it seems we commented on one-anothers stories, at roughtly the same time.

One small note, it's about 'Emphasis', not how fast the story flows. this is what grammar is to regulate?
How fast your story flow, shouldn't be depending on how many, or where you place the comma.
Had I found a comma, I had felt, placed where it should not be, or entirely useless, I should point it out, just as fast, as if it needs to be there?
Just like when a word is spelled incorectly, or if it's the wrong word, just like any other fgrammatical error?
I hope it makes sense.
My purpose with the comment, in the swap, is to suggest improvements, I hope I made a good job, handing you opportunities to stap, think and put in improvements. the once you'd miss, if I had not commented.
We're all blind to our own mistakes, which's why we have "Comment Swap", or so I hope.

Just a curious final note; it seems you red my story earlier?
Considering the comment is top of the list on both profiles.
I guess that's a "Comment Swap"?

Thanks for the comment on "Eponey - the Millenium Bug", just sorry the story was in such porr a state, which you helped me fixing.
I'd also thank you for the encuragement. I know just how easy the comments can go like that.
Will just have to go over the storyu again and again, till it works. As if I had n't been over it enough*giggles*

Well then, thank you very much a second time :]

Thank you very kindly for the comment on the story! Though I'm sorry that my story can be so daunting because of its length, ha. If I could, I would tell the Comment Swap readers that they only need to read a chapter or so, because I would never want to put them through torture if they didn't like the story. Once again, thank you!

Thanks for the welcome!

Bonjour. Thankies. :3

thaaanks I definitely will :)

He Gave Her Coffee updated!
Extra long chapter.
sorry for the wait. [:

Thanks for the comment, I'd love to know what the unknown reason is though lol

updated He Gave Her Coffee (:

Thanks for the comment ^_^

Thank you..:D

Awe, thanks :)
She is pretty awesome!

Please reply back with my email (akilah.adura01@yahoo.co.uk)
Hello dear,
How are you, my name is Miss Akilah Adura, expression of the face can be seen by every one. but the depression of heart can be understood only by true friend.
therefor I will like to demand your trust and sincerity as a friend, and a partnership from you and also know more about you, your country and culture,i will also like to seek your advice too.Please reply back with my email (akilah.adura01@yahoo.co.uk)
Akilah.

Lol so whats up? :P

Nope, but I'll have to listen to them at some point :D

My pleasure ^-^
I'm wonderful thanks.
Let me know if you have any questions~!
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Hey welcome to Mibba =]
I'm Lauren
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