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  • dawn of light

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    okay, so I made a twist that Niall and Meghan did go out, yes? I also implied that the reason Kam decided to leave Niall is because she was jealous that Meg and Niall went out before, hence the preface. that's all i could really say, you good? :)
    April 14th, 2013 at 08:14am
  • imacrimiminal

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    @ dawn of light
    yes please!! =)) i'm not sure if she's lying or telling the truth :((
    April 14th, 2013 at 08:08am
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    Confused?
    lol want me to try to explain?
    But thanks for your comment on Uncle Wesley's Flower Shop c:
    April 14th, 2013 at 07:46am
  • teenage hearts

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    There might be something happening after the story is done but I'm not promising that it's a sequel c:
    April 13th, 2013 at 02:32am
  • DaniGates

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    Thanks for the story comment! :)
    April 12th, 2013 at 07:07pm
  • imacrimiminal

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    now i kinda get maria but i never said it was a stupid plot. since i didn't understand the whole reason why she wanted an abortion, i found the thought of getting it just cause you're insecure of your body kinda stupid. i in no way intended to insult your writing or your plot. if ever you felt like i did i'm sorry! :)
    March 26th, 2013 at 06:18am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Okay, she's not just insecure about her body or whatever, although that's part of it. She's insecure about everything. She's insecure about how everyone feels about her because she thinks that it's all superficial because she doesn't present herself the way she actually is. And it's inferred that she doesn't want to raise a child because if she can't even take care of herself and make herself feel happy, how is she supposed to raise a child to be happy and healthy? It's especially shown in the end, where she explains how it was natural for Jess to hug her and tell her it was alright, and yet it never would have occurred to Maria to do such a thing. She's just not the maternal type.

    I hope that makes more sense and clears up what you think is a stupid plot. Thanks for commenting! :)
    March 26th, 2013 at 02:12am
  • teenage hearts

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    Yea, jack is pretty cute aha c: thanks for the comment!
    March 25th, 2013 at 09:04am
  • collectivision

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    Not so much. It's called Pretence for a reason, Larry plays a part but that's not all it's about. Thanks for the comment! :)
    February 28th, 2013 at 01:52am
  • blades

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    thank you so much for your feedback on Heavy Heart! I've just updated if you'd like to check it out!

    and also, thank you so much for your support of me in my time of going through some personal struggles. your kind words are appreciated.
    February 28th, 2013 at 12:49am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Wow, that's a way more popular idea than I figured it would be! But I'll be writing a one-shot starring the two of them, so you'll be able to read it soon enough! :D Thanks for commenting.
    February 4th, 2013 at 07:56pm
  • DaniGates

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    Thank you so much for commenting on my story, Summer Love! I truly appreciate it!!! And you're going to have to wait and see what happens! I'll try to update soon! ;D
    December 27th, 2012 at 12:35am
  • NeonCafe

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    Thank you for commenting on Truly, Madly, Deeply and hopefully I won't feel like I need to delete it! xx
    December 25th, 2012 at 01:04am
  • DaniGates

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    Thank you so much for commenting on my story, Summer Love. I appreciate it! :)
    December 24th, 2012 at 06:27am
  • iLOVEbritishaccents

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    you didn't offend me at all! I just haven't forgot about them though even though it may seem like it. Sage will actually play a vital role in the last couple chapters!
    November 2nd, 2012 at 05:59am
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    ohmygosh good good! hahaha i was so nervous that that would happen thank the lord it wont =))) i just want to say i really love your story and my comment about sage and liam was just constructive criticism i in no way intended to offend you in any matter i absolutely adore the way you write!! :) sorry if my comment came out a little offensive :D
    November 1st, 2012 at 02:21pm
  • iLOVEbritishaccents

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    As much as I love your idea and wish SO badly I would have thought of that 10 chapters ago, like you have no idea, that would have been perfect... I have an entirely different plan for Nicole, Harry, and Niall! I have not forgotten about Liam or Sage! They'll be more relevant during the last couple chapters though. Thanks for commenting. :)
    November 1st, 2012 at 02:52am
  • Bara-Baby

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    Thank you for commenting again on "One Thing"! We're so happy that you're still liking it! <3
    October 11th, 2012 at 10:48pm
  • Bara-Baby

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    Thank you for commenting on "One Thing"! We're glad you are liking it so far! (:
    October 7th, 2012 at 02:28am