G.Novella / Comments

Thanks for the comment on The L Word.
I realized that I did make Zac come across as kind of a douche so I'm sorry but I am currently rewriting so I hope you can look past it and continue reading. Also, I hope you check out The F Word because Zac has matured quite a bit =)

@ Isadora Pierce
I get what you're saying, it's just, it's hard to understand and grasp at first, you know what I mean? Maybe something more on the summary, than a little excerpt? It's just, it's almost too vague. That's all I'm suggesting.

Thanks for your comment, although I thought maybe you'd understand better if I explained something to you.
Because the story is partially true, I've chosen certain things to put into it, and I've left others out. The reader is supposed to piece things together themselves over the course of the whole thing. It's the first chapter of a second point of view story...not much IS going to make sense at first.

@ hyrule.
Sorry, I just meant capitalize the title, it was bugging me! But otherwise, I never saw any real grammar errors!

Hey! Thanks for the comment on my story. :3
The only thing is you mentioned capatilzation... it is properly capitalized?