June 19th, 2011 at 06:26am
well i didn't think it seemed very rushed. i don't know where you're going either but i still really liked the chapter. it was amazing just like the others.
and you'll eventually figure out where to go with it!
and the writer always is! but that's a good thing because i keep you wanting to improve yourself, ya know? but its an amazing story even if you're being hard on yourself.