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  • avenge my ghost

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    lol thanks for the story comment + subscription!
    makes me feel all happy haha.
    May 17th, 2008 at 04:25pm
  • EmmieVengeance

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    lol, but I still feel bad. I speak my mind, then once its out there I get second thoughts and go "whoops" maybe I should have kept it shut! lol

    But I promise, I'll give you good feedback that you can actually use, not jus "Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" (When you've JUST updated! that really annoys me, as a writer Im like, hello i've just updated, wasn't that good enough!"

    I'll give you real feedback!! <3
    May 15th, 2008 at 05:49pm
  • EmmieVengeance

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    The cuppa tea thing was the fact I looked up at my kettle and it was the first thing I thought of.

    I think cz you split it up from the kidnapping til she was safe, "safe"? (hhmm i don't know with you) so much, it kinda killed the flow and the suspence. ya know? I mean, cliff hangers are a good thing, but not when its every update and you update 2 hours later. Believe me, I have learnt that the hard way. I've been writing scripts since I was 13 and I want to do it for my job once I finish my degree, and on another site I'm known as the cliff hanger queen, but there is such a thing as too many. ya know? Im not havin a go or anything, i really do like your fic, im just being honest. I'll shut up now, cz i really do feel evil!

    x x x
    May 15th, 2008 at 05:10pm
  • EmmieVengeance

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    Yeah, but I still feel bad. Sorry. I should have just let it go, and not let it bother me. But people asking for comments was one of the reasons why I left this place in the first place. Then someone showed me an amazing fic and I came back.
    Not a lot of people read mine, it was on something like update 5 before I even got one comment, but at the end of the day, I know its good and I know people will like it. (I actually post it somewhere else), but you should always write to make yourself happy.

    And, when people just go, "oohh, update!" that's not feedback, that helps no one! I'd rather get one really good comment, that actually has some thought behind it, than 100 of "oohh, update!", ya know!

    I think you'll get 'better' feedbacks if you waited a few days, and gave longer updates. Like the last one, something actually happened that was worth feedback, (argh, I'm being mean again, I'm sorry!) but when it's only something like, er, I don't know, She makes a cuppa tea - what can someone poss give you feedback on, yeah?

    Sorry, I'm being SO mean. But I DO like the story. If I didn't I would have stopped reading a LONG time ago!

    Sorry,
    Love Em
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    May 15th, 2008 at 04:01pm
  • EmmieVengeance

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    Aww I feel mean now. I did mean what I said, but I can't help feeling bad!

    Sorry!

    Im Em anyways!

    x x
    May 15th, 2008 at 03:37pm
  • BeTTie Venin

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    yes,i've seen it too and I have to agree it has changed loads,but usually previews and the movies are not always as they seem. So I am till anticipating for it to come out.
    May 12th, 2008 at 01:36pm
  • Balthazaar

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    Thanks. I'm glad you like my story. ^^
    May 11th, 2008 at 04:49pm
  • BeTTie Venin

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    hehe thanks for loving my story. Yes I am a fan of Twilight. What do you think about the movie? I think it will be good. As long as the actors and the director stick to the book.
    May 11th, 2008 at 03:15pm
  • Syriarcina

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    thank you so much for reading and commenting my story.
    i appreciate it a lot.

    x]
    May 10th, 2008 at 11:43pm
  • Kak0o8

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    lol, yeah, i know it sucks but one more month left! whoo whoo! i am waiting for summer to come! lol
    May 8th, 2008 at 08:14pm
  • Kak0o8

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    i was just curious lol i am still in school in usa. lol
    May 8th, 2008 at 07:05pm
  • Kak0o8

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    are u suppose to be in school or what? i am in school.
    May 8th, 2008 at 06:09pm
  • Time.For.Bullets.

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    lol thanks!
    i started writing that about a year ago and am just now posting!
    ill update asap!
    May 6th, 2008 at 03:24pm
  • I Fought em' All Off

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    hehehe i think i forgot to subscribe to ur new story! im going to subscribe now lol. anyways okies i was like um wait a sec.. bout the name lol. I'm super excited for you to update lol
    April 28th, 2008 at 07:34pm
  • I Fought em' All Off

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    woot can't wait!!!!!! you have to tell me when you put that up.... wait i see it im going to read it right now!!!!!!!! Luv ya!!!!!! you rox my sox!!!!! lol
    April 27th, 2008 at 11:37pm
  • I Fought em' All Off

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    I couldnt comment on the story my dark angel waits for me so im commenting here! I LOVE IT!!!! I'm going to read the next one now!!! I love you!!!! You rock so freaking much lol
    April 27th, 2008 at 09:08pm
  • Viva La Eh-Mii

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    no problem! ive started reading your OTHER one now lol
    April 27th, 2008 at 02:36pm
  • laskater87

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    thanks
    April 26th, 2008 at 05:29am
  • Girlyrays

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    oh and i have to be careful that my mom doesnt catch me on this... she

    literally keeps me in a bubble!!! i call my home a "fishbowl"
    April 20th, 2008 at 07:43pm
  • Girlyrays

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    If you heard from my e-mail... well i'll try to e-mail you as much as i can at school and when my mom isnt around... I had a screaming fit at her... She ruins my life being f***ing paranoid!! i've gotta vent somehow byye.
    April 20th, 2008 at 07:42pm