- Please comment me on my work is it any good ENGLISH GCSE DESCRIPTIVE WRITING

okay so we had to do a piece of descrptive writing abouta character from a movie please comment me on it tips/improvement needed??A shadow could be seen roaming through the silent, spooky graveyard darting past crumbling gravestones as though it was escaping from the small lively town, just beyond the graveyard.The town in the distance looked like the candles to a birthday cake or the lights on a...
October 11th, 2007 at 05:59am

Argh!!

Everytime I stop cutting I make it for a week then just one nasty comment sets me off on a cutting spree. My mum knows I cut and all she told me to tell her when I had, but I can't.My arm is quite free of cuts at the moment usually it's covered.My half term is turning out crap cos I think that my friends really hate me, I haven't seen one of them, even my mum is starting to lose faith in the...
May 29th, 2007 at 10:01pm

dunno what to put

Just writing to say if any1 out there wants to talk about cutting they can to me because i do it ad and trying to stop.
April 4th, 2007 at 07:30pm