hehe i wrote it for a school essay thing for some coursework but then i cudnt use it because it was about 37 pages long and i was only alowed up to 6 :( it was crapp !!!!
but i will need to sort out the chapters then im done :)
but its finished i need some new ideas i spose :\
hehe lol glad to help :) you just need to give me updates now :)
I LOVE YOU TOO
you give me something interesting to do :)
i love your other story as well where you added chapter 9 sayin its discontinued cuz u dont know where its going .. tbf i do have some like that but still
i have got loads more of from brilliant to brutle on a different comp which i will update when i am on there if you want to read it :)
right welll i have read it all and i think you need to make it so that they sorta have another awkward moment before they go on set .. cuz that builds up the tension then skip his band bit and go to wen vanessa's band are playing but have that in gerards pov cuz it will be more interesting going in to his feelings and then you shud have a dance bit after and there shud be a big fight argument thing wen gerard has an argument with the new girl he is with because she is sayign he still likes her and at the dance draco shud ask to dance with vanessa and cuz she has no 1 else she does nd draco makes it seems lke there together and then gereard is looking over so there is the fight and he storms out and vanessa goes after him ... ummm and then i dno what can happen :\
I blatently dont come on here at all anymore now that my job's in full swing. Haha.
How are you?
(Cue the next 478938642 months where we dont get our arses on here!)
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Haha, tis all good :D
I might start writing again y'know...
being around all these lovely vibrant people reminds me of Quizilla. Hmmm.
I shall have to come up with some ideas! :D