HeyaAfter that last journal (thanks for all your support guys) I thought that I would write another one.But don't worry, I'm pretty much okay atm =]I have just written a possible song for my band and I would like some (constructive) critism on it.Obviously you don't know he tune, but I just need help on the words.I would be so grateful if anyone could help.Oh and I also don't dare show this to my...

Aw shite....I really don't know what to do about all of thisMy workload is piling up on me, I am 16 and in sixth-form. The teachers just seem to pile the work on.I feel ill all the time, constantly have colds and i catch practically every bug that is going around. to top it all off i have an under-active thyroid, which basically makes me feel even worse. i have to take pills everyday for the rest...