i'm thinking about updating it now but i'm not sure. should i wait for more comments? am i ridiculous to think that i actually might get more comments?
thanks for the story comment - i'm glad you like it :]
but i'm kinda having a shit load of trouble with the next chapter so it might be a while before i update. but even so, i need another star before i update anyway, so i guess i got time to try and make chapter two decent :]