Actually I got it from a Carpe Diem translation, but I was wondering where else I heard it from. Bahahah thanks for reminding me of that. =) I'm Karen btw.
Just thought I'd say you messed up the lyrics in your signature... "Gunpowder and turpentine" would be correct, in case you were wondering what I was refrencing...
I love your stories! All of them! I've just read every single chapter you have lol I simply couldn't get enough! I can't wait for the next chapter in either of your stories, keep up the phenomenal work!
Well I think a bit of it might just be a bit of grammar stuff which is usually hard to catch anyway. The characters seem well-developed and deeply involved especially Peter which is WONDERFUL. So at the moment, from all that I've read I'd say just keep doing what you're doing.