Neon Army / Comments

  • hi.you probably don't remeber me. and i totaly agree with you that mibba people have gotten annoying. but there are still a few keepers.
    June 25th, 2010 at 12:02am
  • Well, just pop me a note if you do. ^_^
    January 31st, 2010 at 01:45pm
  • Hey thank you so much!
    Truly flattered.
    May you do a banner for my Catastrophic Accident story haha.
    If I'm allowed to choose. :]
    January 9th, 2010 at 05:34am
  • hello:)
    December 18th, 2009 at 07:00pm
  • Thank you! I really loved writing it once I got my act together and did it properly.
    Are you holding any similar contests in the future?
    December 15th, 2009 at 07:56pm
  • Can I get the banner for Beauty and the Beast please XD
    December 15th, 2009 at 03:58am
  • YAY thanks XD
    December 15th, 2009 at 03:52am
  • Hello ...
    I just remember that about ... five monthes ago I entered your random object contest and won, and I told you what prize I wanted but I don't think I told you what story I wanted you to review XD
    I randomly remembered now. So are you still up to it? It's cool if you aren't tehe
    November 21st, 2009 at 04:07am
  • Hey once again wondering about the Fairytale meets Horror Contest. Maybe you haven't been on your Mibba for a while....
    November 1st, 2009 at 08:01pm
  • Hey! Just wondering if you'd forgotten about the Fairytale Meets Horror contest. It's just been about two monthes since you closed it and it'd be nice to have some sort of verdict even if you haven't had time to read all the entries. ^_^
    October 28th, 2009 at 03:34pm
  • Hi :)
    Just to say that you entered my vampires contest, and the deadline's in six days.
    October 25th, 2009 at 11:46pm
  • Hey just wondering when you are updating your Fairytale meets horror contest. Keep me updated?????
    October 11th, 2009 at 04:31am
  • howdy! :D
    September 27th, 2009 at 01:35pm
  • Hey! My website is now up, I was just letting all of my friends know about it... Think you can go check it out?

    http://mickeyhyde.webs.com/

    Thanks,
    Mickey :))
    September 16th, 2009 at 09:03pm
  • woooot fun.
    i'm pretty much.
    hot and tired.
    bleh.
    September 15th, 2009 at 06:56am
  • Hey, you feeling any better hun? :]
    September 8th, 2009 at 08:22pm
  • thankkk youuu.
    i love making layouts.
    it's like. an addiction for me.
    lol.


    so how are you today?
    August 24th, 2009 at 12:32am
  • SAAAAWWWWEEEEETTTT Thanks a lot. Hope to hear back from you soon
    August 24th, 2009 at 12:10am
  • Jenny was so happy about the house they had found. For once in her life 'twas on the right side of town. She unpacked her things with such great ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. How wonderful it was to have her own room. School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy It's just the way she wanted her life to be.

    On the first day of school, everything went great. She made new friends and even got a date! She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be, Because I just got a date with the star of the team!" To be known in this school you had to have clout, And dating this guy would sure help her out. There was only one problem stopping her fate. Her parents had said she was too young to date. "Well I just won't tell them the entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night. Her parents frowned but said, "All right." Excited, she got ready for the big event But as she rushed around like she had no sense, She began to feel guilty about all the lies, But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride?

    Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, But the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Dan was half drunk by this time. But he kissed her and said that he was just fine. Then the room filled with smoked and Dan took a puff. Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff. Now Dan was ready to ride to the point But only after he'd smoked another joint. They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride, Not thinking that he was too drunk to drive.

    They finally made it to the point at last, And Dan started trying to make a pass. A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all (and by a pass, I don't mean playing football.) "Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young. Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb." With all of her might, she pushed Dan away: "Please take me home, I don't want to stay." Dan cranked up the engine and floored the gas. In a matter of seconds they were going too fast.

    As Dan drove on in a fit of wild anger, Jenny knew that her life was in danger. She begged and pleaded for him to slow down, But he just got faster as they neared the town. "Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied. I really went out for a moonlight ride." Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash. "Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!" She doesn't remember the force of impact. Just that everything all of a sudden went black. She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble, And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble! Voices she heard...a few words at best. But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck. Then wondered to herself if Dan was all right, And if the people in the other car was alive.

    She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. "You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad." These voices echoed inside her head, As they gently told her that Dan was dead. They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too." "But the people in the other car!?" Jenny cried. "We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done I only wanted to have just one night of fun." "Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim, And wish I could return their families to them." "Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, And that it's my fault so many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?" The nurse just stood there-she never agreed. But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes. And a few moments later Jenny died.

    A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best To bid that girl her one last request?" She looked at the man with eyes so sad. "Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad." This story is sad and unpleasant but true, So young people take heed, it could have been you.

    READ AND PASS ON TO AT LEAST 10 PEOPLE

    Please listen to this angel's request......

    If you do the small favor she asks to come true, She will be sent down to guard and protect you.

    Please....do it for Jenny.

    Send ten copies and see what happens in four days. You will get a surprise. This is true, even if you are not superstitious.

    Good luck, but please remember: 10 copies of this message must leave your hands in 24 hours.
    August 23rd, 2009 at 12:07am
  • Aw, I heard you're not feeling too splended.
    I hope you feel better soon, dear.
    :]
    August 21st, 2009 at 07:01am