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  • tom riddle

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    I'm Chelsea, by the way :)
    And I thought I recognised the words. I got that one when I bought that album. It's a nice song.

    So you made it yourself? That's really impressive. I have a question, actually, if you don't mind. Whenever I try to make a signature, it always says it's too long because of the gradient. I have to colour each letter seperately, so it takes up a lot. I was just wondering how you got so [i]many[/i] colours and gradients in there ;D

    'Cause I've seen a lot of really cool themes, and they've got these long lines of gradient, and they have it going from one colour to another, to another, to another. And if I did that it'd take it up. So yeah. Just wondering, from someone who looks pretty pro, how you make them? ;D
    August 6th, 2010 at 09:48am
  • tom riddle

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    Hi there.
    Just wanted to say that I think your theme is beautiful.
    They're lyrics from Painting Flowers aren't they? I think.

    Anyway, also wanted to ask if you made it yourself? ;D
    August 5th, 2010 at 08:38am
  • ladyhawke.

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    Thanks a bunch for the story comment :) how do I get a Beta-Reader?
    July 22nd, 2010 at 08:11pm
  • dr. faustus

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    Oh, okay thank you for clearing that up, but on the jumping around bits. I’m not sure if this could have changed anything, but in my flashback scenes, I did have them in italics, but I removed them because I figured if the mother is talking to her children then the readers must know it’s a flashback, since I stated she died in the first chapter. But my point is, all the flashbacks are in regular text. The only time I jumped from days was in chapter six. I hope that makes sense or maybe it was something completely different all together that confused you. :)
    July 20th, 2010 at 03:07am
  • dr. faustus

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    Thank you for the review, but i was kind of confused. Did you read the whole story or just 6 and 7? I just didn't understand the first paragraph you said I'm my review. Thanks again :)
    July 19th, 2010 at 08:50pm
  • Road To Heaven.

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    thanks 4 the story comment.(:<3
    July 19th, 2010 at 08:24pm
  • Nowhere Kids Voice

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    its no problem ^^
    July 14th, 2010 at 06:44pm
  • Alexander Gaskarth.

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    You're welcome, I'm just glad you're happy :D
    And it's fineee, I'm just thick XD xx
    July 12th, 2010 at 08:42pm
  • Alexander Gaskarth.

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    Ooh I see. And I'm glad I made your day :D
    xx
    July 12th, 2010 at 07:42pm
  • Alexander Gaskarth.

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    I forget as well! lmfao
    I mean it though! You are brilliant! :D Arms xx
    July 10th, 2010 at 09:40am
  • lovely youth

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    haha, we're so picky!
    July 9th, 2010 at 04:26am
  • lovely youth

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    the layout thing annoys me too. if it's just a bunch of clashing neon colours, i close the page. i can't concentrate on the story if the layout doesn't look decent.
    July 8th, 2010 at 06:24pm
  • lovely youth

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    totally. so many stories on here have a lot of potential, but then they just end up being impossible to read - whether its because of constant spelling/grammar mistakes, or the writer just has no idea what they're doing.
    July 8th, 2010 at 06:02pm
  • Alexander Gaskarth.

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    Because then you can't forget you have them :D
    Ooh tehe Well I look forward to reading it, you're a brilliant writer! :D
    xx
    July 8th, 2010 at 10:30am
  • lovely youth

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    thanks so much for that comment. it really made me smile.
    and i know what you mean about not being able to read some stories on here.
    July 8th, 2010 at 08:02am
  • Alexander Gaskarth.

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    Maybe profile comments will work better for you XD
    And that's ok, it's in your head and that's fine how you make it XD
    Imma guess she meets Alex? tehe
    Btw imma go sleep now, so nunight. Reply, and i'll reply tomorrow morning.
    xx
    July 8th, 2010 at 01:59am
  • craic queen

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    Megggggggg I miss you. :'( Arms
    June 28th, 2010 at 12:37am
  • J. Third

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    His eye can see everything! Even you, sitting there reading this comment! O.O

    Maybe you need something practical in your life. When people signed up for Mibba they signed up for a second life. Life get's boring and that's why we are on here, the internet. But like life, people have to constantly talk to others if they want Mibba to be interesting. I feel like that anyway.

    :D Arms My speech went good! I cry or freeze up when put in front of an audience but I didn't! I was totally calm and it went really well. I'm just glad its over!
    YUSH!

    Meh, my week's been... ok. I went shopping today and all I bought was a record. T_T That drained me so I might go take a nap. Real soon.
    Maybe. I might just roam around Mibba for a bit. XD
    June 23rd, 2010 at 07:37am
  • carpe diem;

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    Heeey Meg. Arms
    I know I always seem to miss you when you're online and stuff.
    But just letting you know I'm still here and still your friend hopefully :(
    I know we don't talk a lot anymore, things have been weird lately. x]
    But yeah, miss you babycakess.
    June 18th, 2010 at 05:11pm
  • J. Third

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    That's alright, I haven't been on Mibba that much. It got boring. HAHA!

    Ive been good, nothing exciting happening in my life.
    Kinda freaking out because I have a speech this Thursday.
    I could scream right now about how scared I am!

    That's all that is happening right now.
    Got anything planned for the rest of the week? :D
    June 15th, 2010 at 08:41am