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    I’m sorry…
    June 8th, 2010 at 03:20am
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    No you don’t. You don’t-
    I’m not worth it. Please believe me.
    June 8th, 2010 at 03:01am
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    Don’t get me wrong. I absolutely love it. I can’t tell you how much it means…
    June 8th, 2010 at 02:59am
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    Oh, if only you knew! But… Aye me. I’m a foolish child.

    Truly, I don’t deserve words such as those.
    June 8th, 2010 at 02:57am
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    I don’t… deserve… that. I’m…
    Damn it. I can barely see the keyboard…
    June 8th, 2010 at 02:54am
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    You’re willing to give me several wins for a few words?
    June 8th, 2010 at 02:46am
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    Mm, speechless, eh? Do I hint a win for me?
    June 8th, 2010 at 02:38am
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    Um, I think so.
    June 8th, 2010 at 02:30am
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    They aren’t much. Honestly. But, you really like them?
    June 8th, 2010 at 02:25am
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    You deserve them because it’s the least I could ever do to repay what you have given me. Do you not want them?
    June 8th, 2010 at 02:23am
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    A treasure. A white rose among the black. A lovely rose indeed. A great flower that cannot wilt, but grow a gorgeous petal for every beat of my reawakened heart. A mighty bloom to douse my gray existence with a vast sea of cheerful color. You may possess a few troublesome thorns, yes, but that only adds to your untouchable brilliance.

    That's the last one. I promise.
    I didn't mean to make you cry...
    June 8th, 2010 at 02:15am
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    You what?
    June 8th, 2010 at 02:13am
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    Do what again?
    June 8th, 2010 at 02:11am
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    I felt so wondrous while wrapped in your words. Colors were brighter; a luminosity I could scarcely believe existed. I heard enchanting melodies I would never have even had the thought to open my ears to before. Even the most putrid of scents would have smelled like a valley of the sweetest white roses- as beautiful as your darling soul. My heart was thawed and washed clean of the hatred it had so long withheld. My smile was genuine: A testament to the overwhelming joy I sensed lurking within my soul.
    June 8th, 2010 at 02:08am
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    I didn’t mean to…
    June 8th, 2010 at 02:01am
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    It isn’t the only one like it… But, what did you think?
    June 8th, 2010 at 01:54am
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    "A moment of pure elation flared through the sorrow. A smile touched not only my lips, but my heart as well. I discovered a purpose- something to strive for. For the briefest of moments I was lost to euphoria rather than the shame that foreshadows my soul. I saw a light. No, not the uncertain flickering of a candle, but the mighty roar of a hungry blaze feeding on all the awful memories. My eyes fell upon words that inspired the poet within instead of proving to the outward cynic what a desolate world it is in which we struggle to survive in."

    Have you read that before? It's one of the more readable ones...
    June 8th, 2010 at 01:44am
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    Beautiful, maybe. But do they make sense? Not really. That’s what frustrates me. These words float across my consciousness and pester me until I write them down, but they don’t make the least bit of sense.
    June 8th, 2010 at 01:36am
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    That makes me smile. I’ve actually written a lot more inspired by our talks. Most of it is just insane ramblings, though. Not much of it is poetry.
    June 8th, 2010 at 01:32am
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    It… was about you. Sorta.
    June 8th, 2010 at 01:29am
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