I saw you wrote a YMAS fanfic. I hope you don't mind my commenting! xo
If you've got the time, I hope you wouldn't mind checking out a story I write as a collaboration with my friend, Charlie.
http://stories.mibba.com/read/245856/We-Both-Go-Down-Together/
Comments and constructive criticism are all recommended, so I hope you'd give it a read :) xx
Thank You so much for the comment on my new story. I'm so stoked that people are reading it, and yeah, ace.
I'm working really hard on the original characters, like I want them to be able to stand up on their own if John and the guys aren't in a chapter. I love creating characters too, especially a missmatched family.
Again, cheers. x