Heya ;) thanks for your story comment. Just read your own story and I really like it so far.
If you want some help with it the first thing i suggest is to make sure you've got a spell check in whatever program you use to write. Saves you a lot of time in proofreading stuff ^^
If you want more tips and ideas about how i write my own stuff just send me a message alright? ^^ i'm always up for a chat anyways