Make a Wish... - Comments

This is so much like what 2 of my really close friends are going through, so it definitely strikes a chord.
I think, one of the most important things that a poem can do, one of the things which separates the good from the great, (on some level, anyway) is the ability to make the reader feel. To inspire emotions and sensations, wishes and such. And you have definitely accomplished that. Excellent job!
I really do like it! So well-written...

Yes, i really agree..
it has quite strong hope in it.

Someone's not writing about Die are they? XDD (teasing XP)

Really, it's very good ^ ^ And so true xp Mixture of all the emotions on my end-I suck at poetry :/ So you're talented there ^ ^