Beautiful Lies - Comments

  • Thor

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    Very interesting, i loved how you did the whole 'Beauty now..' repeatedley which was great because it really stook in my head.
    The wording is great and the title is amazing <3
    It also reminds me of the fairytale, sleeping beauty, except its ending is dark and not 'happily ever after'.
    this is reall great overall
    very well done xD
    January 11th, 2011 at 08:28pm
  • Wanderlust.

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    interesting poem, my favorite part is "Beauty now burns Smoke in the air"
    February 7th, 2010 at 08:18am
  • InebriatedLover

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    interesting poem,
    it was very detailed,
    July 23rd, 2009 at 07:48am
  • Cambria Kilgannon

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    This is coooollllll. I wrote an English essay about a poem about how beauty fades in death. Wow, how cool am I, right?
    July 17th, 2009 at 06:00am
  • PoemOf4Letters

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    Love it! Very clever!
    July 16th, 2009 at 03:24am