For god sakes! No reason to be fakes! - Comments

I love your take on life and you're opinion is beautifully and persuasively put across. with this piece you built an intricate house of cards and i felt like any minute they could come crashing down from a flick of your wrist, i don't think you know your own power with a pen as i felt completely vulnerable but hooked to the plot. =]

:] Love the message. Well written and grabs your attention from the Title and keeps it through every stanza.