Carved Out Veins - Comments

  • EverRose

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    Wow...this one was great. Finally a good poem! You did great!

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    May 9th, 2010 at 04:12am
  • save13

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    Powerful and brilliant. Really. It reminded me of this skit performed at an acting class I attended in 7th grade. I'll tell you about it sometime. But anywawys, enjoyed the poem. Honestly though, the poem, atleast to me, was a little choppy and akward sounding at times. But I still found myself enjoying it. Keep the poetry coming!
    November 30th, 2009 at 06:34am
  • na_na_na

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    is it wrong that i really like this poem?? its so good!!!
    October 21st, 2009 at 07:15pm