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  • broken.dancer

    broken.dancer (100)

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    okay.. thanks for the criticism :)
    September 8th, 2010 at 12:23am
  • masqued in black

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    i think it's good. just be more...um, subtle :)
    November 12th, 2009 at 11:13am
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