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  • Hunter.Jumper

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    Wow! I LOVE THIS!!! My favorite lines are the first two. I've never been able to capture a peacocks tail in words before, but those two lines just summed it up! Wow! So much said in so few words!

    Once again... I LOVE IT! :D
    November 13th, 2010 at 06:59am
  • BoysAreHeartBreakers

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    Whos's POV is this? It's make you think it's great.
    March 11th, 2010 at 05:22am
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