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False Illusions; (100)

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I like the rhyming, and the message.

February 6th, 2010 at 08:52pm

stereopathic (100)

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i love your rhyming! cute poem.

February 6th, 2010 at 08:38pm

The Warden's Wife (100)

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Another good one! Amazing xD
You are really good at these and I love the way you word them ^^
Kudossss

February 6th, 2010 at 05:37am

Melbaby18 (100)

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Aw. Faythers! This is a good poem, why you never read it to me on the phone IDK!!!!!!! LovrE you chicka MELISSA

February 5th, 2010 at 06:32am

Luvbytes (100)

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Ok this one sorta threw me off too. I guess because of the rhyming in the first stanza. I dont know if that was intentional or not, but since it was in the first stanza I expected it to be through out and it wasnt...

I really do love the postive themes you seem to have in your work though.

February 5th, 2010 at 03:43am