Waiting. - Comments

Jonathan Davis. (100)

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That was one amazing poem, I loved just about everything about it.

November 25th, 2007 at 11:15pm

Antagonist (200)

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That was beautiful, darling.

November 16th, 2007 at 12:32am

Welshiee (350)

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I love this poem, much like your other work because it's amazing, but also i love the hidden depth, intentional or not it's got depth that really creates emotion sorta speak, and that's what really hit me about this poem, It's a great piece of work by an amazing writer.
<3 xx

November 10th, 2007 at 08:07pm

Sneki. (100)

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That's great. :]

November 9th, 2007 at 09:07pm

lolz (150)

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Lovely poem; however I would have mixed up the rhyming scheme a little more.... sorry, I suck xP You're a good writer.

November 9th, 2007 at 12:15am

The Master (15)

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It had the most peculiar sense of Edgar Allen Poe.

A marvel to read.

November 8th, 2007 at 10:55pm