Am I Depressed? - Comments

oops*** IM 17 now!!!!

in 17 now. : ) hehe

this is a really good poem :] i really like it. only thing i suggest: use more complex words, but not SO complex that the reader wont understand what youre trying to say, you know?? like....instead of saying "i dont like to be around anyone", you could say "i find loneliness comforting" or something like that, you know?? otherwise i love it :D

Plz comment!!!!!! tell me if you like it or dislike it. help me if needed...i need to
improve!!!!!!!