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Yes, yes, yes. I think it would flow better without all the spaces, though. You could indent every second line if you wanted to keep it paced like that, perhaps?

January 14th, 2008 at 03:17am
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WOW MAN that was amazing! awesome! aweinsiring! i LOVE it...

December 6th, 2007 at 02:52pm
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[b] simply amazing i loved it! u r an awesome poet![/b]

December 5th, 2007 at 07:26am

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