Only One Awake - Comments

Yes sheysh; i [i] told[/i] you he was amazing!

Wow. Absolutely amazing poem i agree with the others there is so much emotion that i was drawn in right from the start and the symbolism is great how do you do it? I wish I could write half as good as this!

Again, was blown away.
You have such emotion, and you know now to pull your audience in.
There is not one poem that you have written, young Teo that has not made me want to read more.

This is really good. I love the symbolism, and the way the story unfolds is simply fantastic.
I hope you feel better too...