Plea - Comments

No, no, no, no, lol I didn't mean that Christ threw his life away. I meant it like... I'm not quite sure how to explain it... Like how some people say "oh my God!" in frustration. It's not, addressing Christ. It's used almost as an, and I know this isn't the right word I'm looking for, expletive of sorts. Does that make sense?

Okay... I due love yet I don't. First I don't think Crist threw his life away, just cause it gives the shit like me hope that there IS better then what we got. Secondly... well this may sound lame but I think it doesn't quite fit. (sorry but it is my opinion eh?) otherwise its written well and with a meaning. Oh! almost forgot... nice ending.

your poems make mine sound like a 3 year old wrote them.
O_O
but take that as a really good compliment. hehe

hey.. this is a really great lyric. the others are as well ;)
oh and thanks for commenting on my poem ;)

Yea! Thankies so freaking much!!!

5) Broken and bruised hearts cry out
Devastated by inhumanity
Due to indifference and disinterest
Remain unheard.

B2) Stop this insanity!
Brooding won’t do anything for you.
Society says that you’ve screwed up.
Consequences are a lot, but hey,
Throw it in their face.
Show ‘em what you’re made of!

HANNERS I LOVED THAT PART SPECIALLY!!!!!!!! You are a beautiful writer!!! Lovered it, heheh.