The rhyming is commendable;
consistent enough to give it a flow,
but still does what it wants to
I also appreciate how even though it's a deeper,
darker-emotionally kind of poem,
you don't feel the need to use dozens of fancy words
It doesn't have excess amounts of "opaqueness"
(opacity? opaquacity?)
consistent enough to give it a flow,
but still does what it wants to
I also appreciate how even though it's a deeper,
darker-emotionally kind of poem,
you don't feel the need to use dozens of fancy words
It doesn't have excess amounts of "opaqueness"
(opacity? opaquacity?)