Her Face - My Face - Comments

  • thatbekkahgirl

    thatbekkahgirl (100)

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    The rhyming is commendable;
    consistent enough to give it a flow,
    but still does what it wants to

    I also appreciate how even though it's a deeper,
    darker-emotionally kind of poem,
    you don't feel the need to use dozens of fancy words
    It doesn't have excess amounts of "opaqueness"
    (opacity? opaquacity?)
    May 21st, 2010 at 02:30am