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  • Tala Lakota

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    lov it
    March 30th, 2011 at 01:57am
  • Mariisa

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    Reading the comment that didn't agree with one line, I must say that I think everyone does deserve each other. How else would we go about unifying the world if we can't show willingness to help resolve psychological problems...

    This poem is good. It's not terrible at all. If we're all alike deep down, then we're all awesome poets (as cheesy as that sounds, it could be true). Hahah. :D I like this poem. Well-written and feels like the way I write some of my long poems.
    March 14th, 2011 at 06:26am
  • LAMBinLOVE

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    didnt agree w/ the "We all deserve eachother" (i mean what about rapists and abusers.. ik that seems negative but thats what i thought about) but anywayz i liked the rest alot^^
    March 5th, 2011 at 09:46pm
  • mkmsunshine

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    love this. its the truth and rhymes very well
    January 31st, 2011 at 01:00am
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