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    this is a great poem. I loved the rhyming, they weren't too obvious and really contributed to the imagery. :) nice job.
    February 26th, 2011 at 02:09am
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    good poem, i like how you went from a two line stanza to four and repeat that :)
    February 26th, 2011 at 01:39am
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