Living Like This - Comments

Amazing job at writing this. Gives me a new idea for a short story I've been planning to write. :]

WOW. I love reading poems I can relate to, and this hits close to home. Something to think about though... when you live like this, like I used to, and you focus on the bad in life, you are blind to the beauty that's here on this rich round planet. Amazing poem, great job.