Fake a smile, work it girl. - Comments

  • withflyingcolors

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    wonderfully tragic. beautifully written and so real. keep on writing, girl!
    May 21st, 2012 at 07:39pm
  • Gone;;;;

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    Lovely poem, just came across it, wonderfully written! :)
    April 1st, 2012 at 10:50am
  • Anotherday

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    i was just reading this again - you need to post another poem - because you can write girl!
    November 1st, 2011 at 10:05pm
  • AriannaNoel

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    This is such a meaningful poem! I love it. (:
    August 14th, 2011 at 10:40pm
  • WarWithPaper

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    Wow, that's really good and shows how a lot of girls must feel in today's culture
    July 20th, 2011 at 11:13pm
  • BeautyfulLuv

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    This is really good! You're an amazing poet! I love, love love it!!
    July 6th, 2011 at 01:31am
  • Sports Lover

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    This is really good. This is honestly how most girl's our age think they have to be. But they just don't see that they are beautiful the way they are! (:
    June 24th, 2011 at 04:14pm
  • nonnie

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    sad in an amazing waay ! :L
    good work !
    June 22nd, 2011 at 03:57am
  • Gone;;;;

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    Really good :)
    June 19th, 2011 at 09:18am
  • GraceElizabeth11

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    this is so good! i love it <3
    June 17th, 2011 at 03:19am
  • RedWallFlowers

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    Wow, I love this! It's brilliantly written.
    June 16th, 2011 at 09:01am
  • slit wrist sammy

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    sad indeed but absolutly true...
    June 12th, 2011 at 02:41am
  • Anotherday

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    i apsalutly love this poem _ its relly good, i love the repetition and it flowes so well... brilliant!
    June 5th, 2011 at 10:04pm
  • ThomasBerkshire

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    Its sad when you realize that in reality most pageants probably have people like this participating in them all in all a nice poem i like the rhymes too
    June 4th, 2011 at 07:54pm
  • girl meets girl

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    Wow. That was... really sad but brilliant!
    June 4th, 2011 at 03:45am
  • gagalover24

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    very depressing but really well written
    June 4th, 2011 at 03:39am
  • lou.

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    that's sad.
    June 4th, 2011 at 03:34am