Needle in the Hay Sack - Comments

  • Psychotic_Monkey_33

    Psychotic_Monkey_33 (100)

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    I really enjoyed this one, LOL, I dated a guy named Zach and felt this way about him. I like how you channel emotions through beautiful imagery and sensory.
    April 2nd, 2012 at 01:03am
  • tumblingcactus

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    This is really beautiful. I love it SO much:)
    March 30th, 2012 at 05:36am
  • June_Music_C

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    Amazing poem, and i loved the four lines that you kept reusing. Its a very sweet poem that seems filled with honesty. Everyone always hopes they find their needle in the haystack.
    June 13th, 2011 at 06:06am