Broken Heart's Club - Comments

  • Another one I love! It loves perfectly and fits with the title (of course). It's really beautiful and the metaphorical terms! I love the whole 'Taking in new lambs' you've got, it's really beautiful. The words flow perfectly together which really helps.
    Seriously keep writing, talent is usually a hard thing to come by.

    Onto the next poem, I pray for more Metaphors 'cus I love em!
    August 30th, 2011 at 01:54pm