In Drawers - Comments

Wow. This is pretty deep. The imagery is beautiful as the message behind it. You such beautiful metaphors and lines. I like how it compares people to things that can be easily discarded or forgotten by being put in a box or shoved in a drawer. It's such an amazing thought and I never would have looked at it that way.

This is absolutely stunning. Your imagery and comparing someone to bits of paper is lovely, in a way. I've never seen someone use it in such a metaphoric way before, and it really does work amazingly well. "Lead scratches on crumpled paper" is an absolutely beautiful line. You've conveyed so much emotion into this, it really is fabulous.

Wow. This is beautiful. You have amazing structure and vivid imagery. I almost have no words!

Such interesting imagery, I just had to comment. The way you tied the image of the cup Christ drinks from with the very last line was probably my favourite. Such a very remarkable read.

It's not a hardship to rec this at all.

Wow, powerful. You're really good at making very structured poems.

I like how this poem has an element of uncertainty and instability to it, it really ties in with the dream inspiration behind it, because those are the exact emotions one feels when having a nightmare.

What a beautiful poem. Very poignant. I could feel the pain and sadness.

The poem was well written too. The flow worked really well. I especially liked the second and third stanzas.

This is such a beautiful poem. I think it's my favorite of yours now! It flows so nicely together, and it holds so much thought and meaning. I love this--amazing job!

I really liked this. It was short and held a big meaning to it and I liked the way it was portrayed and organized. This is a really great piece. Good job!

Wow! This is really great!

This is beautiful.