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  • Brandon Nobles

    Brandon Nobles (100)

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    In the sense I mean to use it as, is what the definition is: a little song.
    September 9th, 2012 at 04:52am
  • FreshmanLGZ

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    Not bad, but it actually isn't a sonnet :)
    September 9th, 2012 at 03:04am
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