Suicide King - Comments

@ theworstthingsinlife
Thanks!

@ Ashes of Scarlett
Thank you! That was the first poem I'd ever written. I actually didn't do it on purpose I just knew I had to get the lava in my head out. So again, thanks!

This is beautiful.

This is beautiful.

i like this, let me start off with that.

at the beginning, i wasn't very convinced to be honest (might've just been my bad mood though) but as the poem continued and i started to see the real meaning behind the words, i found more and more liking to it. the part where you kept repeating the last words is very interesting. once again, i was unsure about it at first, but it ended up better as i read on. i don't even know how to explain, i just like the imagery you described and the thoughts and moods of the fighter. what makes me love the poem is that you took a wolf to compare it to. and the last few lines are amazing. not just cuz i have the same oppionion, but cuz it's powerful...