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  • fawmspk

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    Thank you. :)
    October 29th, 2012 at 10:23pm
  • JessiKAT

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    I liked it. (:
    October 27th, 2012 at 04:09am
  • fawmspk

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    I know it isn't poemy...It was more of thoughts..ha ha
    October 27th, 2012 at 03:03am
  • joyofthekill

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    You have a lot of great points in this poem. But there really isn't much of a literary art to it. There's not much description or rhythm in the poem.
    October 27th, 2012 at 02:47am
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