The Painter - Comments

No problem! It'll be fun to find out what it is, I'm always looking for more ways to broaden my horizons with knowledge! . . . .Okay maybe not

@ NegroLeo
Again like I said, I'm not entirely too knowledgeable on poetry - I'm more of a novelist type of person so I'm definitely not the best person to give this information. Honestly, google might be better than myself at the moment. Sorry!

@ hellxoxsunshine
No problem I think it was really good. But do you think you could explain what narrative is?

@ NegroLeo
Thank you very much! The kind words are greatly appreciated.

I thought it was strong and good. You were right when you picked narrative. I've never used it before but from the way you wrote it I think you got it right.