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  • FixTheBrokenPieces

    FixTheBrokenPieces (100)

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    This is a very emotional poem and I really enjoy it. I think many people have felt this way, and I can connect on a very personal level which makes this poem even better. You've done an amazing job connecting with your audience and I like how you took it from 'that girl' to you. This is a short poem but it packs in so much depth. Beautiful job!
    July 1st, 2013 at 08:27pm
  • Monstertea

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    I love the emotion .. it has such great flow
    December 11th, 2012 at 03:41am