Perfection - Comments

pearlhunter (100)

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This poem is really really good :D its so simple and well structured and rhymed and the opposites too like 'quietly loud'. Love it all, what a wonderful poem!! :)

May 5th, 2013 at 03:00pm

Draw 1 (100)

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I really like the way you suitably fit the lines together so that you would not offend anyone in any way. Really like it!

January 17th, 2013 at 04:59am

Goldyfish (100)

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@Lmnop

Thank you!

January 16th, 2013 at 05:47am

Lmnop (100)

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I admire the simplicity in your poem because it makes the point proven while also open to interpretation and I like your idea. (:

January 16th, 2013 at 05:40am